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By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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Photo by Rob Griffin on Unsplash

i am sewn up, stitched tight

I can't bring myself to open

Each stitch is tight, hurt so terribly to tie together and the indifferent airs made them even tear a little bit but still intact just barely
In fact, the stitches are barely holding even though—i refuse to open.

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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran11 months ago

    Oh wow, that was so vivid! Scary and poignant at the same time. Loved it!

  • Komal11 months ago

    It’s that push-and-pull of wanting to stay closed but still feeling everything underneath. If you ever need someone to gently unpick a thread or two, I’ve got tiny scissors and a lot of patience.😊

  • Ah, those two angels/demons of our nature doing such battle together: the one that desires to be safe & protect oneself, the other that just needs to get it out there. Which ultimately wins? Not even the end of your tale here actually tells the tale for sure.

  • Tiffany Gordon11 months ago

    Phenomenal work as usual sweetpea! Sending you a big hug babygurl! 💕

  • angela hepworth11 months ago

    So intensely crafted—amazing work.

  • C. Rommial Butler11 months ago

    A well-wrought prose poem, Melissa! Short, haunting, bursting at the seams with meaning.

  • Dana Crandell11 months ago

    The imagery in this would work even without the photo. Very intense!

  • Rachel Deeming11 months ago

    Oo, this made me squirm a little. I think it's the picture and the idea of you bursting or oozing out, despite trying to keep everything tight. Edgy, Melissa.

  • Marie381Uk 11 months ago

    Wow great writing 🍀🍀🍀🍀

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