
Oh, what happens to one's disguises
When love leaves you with surprises
Left to hide just how you feel
Denying what was real
Beginning again
A sad sack friend
Becoming
Someone
New
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions



Comments (5)
Loved the “sad sack friend” line and the rest of the poem of course! Well done, Kelli!
The ending felt very hopeful. Loved your poem
One way of looking on the bright side of things.
A sad-sack crow wearing boots. From there a metamorphosis arises. You really are good at this breakup clap-back word play. Nicely done.
I love this and it goes well with the image.