Standing in the rain
So that you can’t see them fall
Washing you away
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
If you like what you read, feel free to leave a tip, I would love some feedback
Find me on twitter @kelli7958958
or facebook
Keep reading
More stories from Kelli Sheckler-Amsden and writers in Poets and other communities.
Comments (4)
Excellent piece. Well done.
Love the reference to the catharsis of standing in the rain! Excellent entry, Kelli!
What a beautiful way to picture raindrops. Good work.
Wow, such powerful words. Standing in the rain, with the rain already falling on the face, it’s almost like they are already crying. But it can be used to hide the tears as you cleverly conveyed in this haiku. I love that the tears also became the person who inflicted the pain or who caused the heartbreak, to then be washed away by the rain. Such a thoughtful and well written piece.