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Choose Alpha and Omega Unity

It’s the one that wants you

By The Dani WriterPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
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That mind of yours

met me chest-deep in memories

pulled up a chair

and reached maximum integration

in seconds

Exercised patience

followed by well-disciplined restraint

before you questioned

Did not even blink

when I said

Thanks

but no thanks

Gave space

Respectful like that

Warrior King not weakling

Successful like that

Received a tentative offer of friendship

Let it breathe

stretch

settle

seed

A natural union

while destinies wreathe

combined paths of separate purpose

into breath-giving artistry

absent road maps

and now here come you

ecstasy-giddy

after two weeks in Curaçao

stone-stunned

over first positive pregnancy test

Two years later

in awe at second

Starshine brimming over love’s re-emergence

Laughed to tears

when they were twins

Caressed my tired to restoration

Laid your calm

across the cleft of my back and

prayed

for inexhaustible communion

then

with a quiet reverence

exhaled

refined soul

Photo by Marek Piwnicki on Unsplash

Author’s Note:-

Perhaps commitment isn’t in the definition, but in reality a comprehensive way of living that spills outside the confines of what we individually think it is. From this perspective, it can be seen as more seamless and easy, less compartmentalized and arduous. There is the ‘union faithfulness’ of man and woman, but also community with nature, humanity and cosmos etc., etc.

What if where we struggle in one arena is a smaller fragment of a 360 degree view enshrined in Universal Law that holds no concept of division?

Essentially, we cannot successfully have commitment with each other, if we don’t have that same dedication level with the plants and animals, the earth, or the (fill in the blank too numerous to contain everything that could go in it.)

Just a few thoughts while pulling strands of this poem together…

(Originally published at https//:medium.com)

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Thank you for reading! For taking the time to filter in between my lines and simmer with me in reflections. I appreciate your presence.

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The Dani Writer

Explores words to create worlds with poetry, nonfiction, and fiction. Writes content that permeates then revises and edits the heck out of it. Interests: Freelance, consultations, networking, rulebook-ripping. UK-based

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  • Caitlin Charlton5 months ago

    This poem was like a lovely dance. I smiled when he was found not weak in your eyes. There’s a certain thing us women look for and I am happy you found that. What a lovely surprised that it was twins. Love your description of it being as like love’s re-emergence. You swept us away with your love and respect for that man and took us to heavens gate with your way with words in rhythm. I like that you stayed with the poem as you wrote your authors note. I do agree. We cannot commit to anyone, unless we nurture the same dedication to plants animals and all things in nature. ♥️🤗

  • Marie Wilson5 months ago

    Excellent.

  • Antoni De'Leon5 months ago

    Maybe humans approach life with pre-thought expectations and not allow it to flow as it should. Very deep words to the universe.

  • "Essentially, we cannot successfully have commitment with each other, if we don’t have that same dedication level with the plants and animals, the earth, or the (fill in the blank too numerous to contain everything that could go in it.)" You raise a very good point here. Very profound and thought provoking. Loved your poem!

  • Tiffany Gordon5 months ago

    Exquisite & meaningful! Go Dani! 🎉💪🏾🫶🏾🌸

  • Silver Daux5 months ago

    This is a masterpiece!! I loved the journey this poem took and the voice throughout. Amazing!

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