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Chickadee

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By Aspen Marie Published 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
Photo: mine

Marigold and sage

Colours that emanate

From her aura

Rich brown eyes

Framed by curved brows

In possession of a most

Charming laugh; clear bell

Merrily ringing out

Across blue skies

Possessing grace and gratitude

In abundance

All she asked for

On her birthday: openness

Requests can be a tricky thing

Universe sometimes bestows

Dubious gifts

Morphing into twisted lessons

Black holes

Belong in space

Eerie sense of wrongness

When they’re discovered

Embedded within

The soft, pink tissue

Upon one’s chest

Hospital gown necklines

Mock brides in bleak parody

Intrepid aisle marching

Towards an unknowable future

Transformation; bloody rituals

Excising all innocence

Grey days weigh heavy

Weeks, months; boulders

To push up

Never ending hills

Maybe all women are birds

Whose wings

Have been cut

Cornered, penned

Fattened up for

Slicing and dicing

Chickadees sing songs

Only children can hear

Palms outstretched

Holding silent and still

Seeds enticing them

To perch on palms

Memories so dear

They remain forever

A gift; to sit together

Dressed in taupe and brown

Unfolding our secrets

Like when we were

Kids, we made

Paper fortune tellers

Etching purple hearts

Across four-square predictions

Little girls dreaming

Glittery dreams

Ready for golden adventures

To finally begin

Arms open, outstretched

We transformed

Becoming starlings, aloft

Riding thermals

Ever upward

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About the Creator

Aspen Marie

In love with life and all of its foibles.

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  • Sara Wilson3 months ago

    "maybe all women are birds whose wings have been cut. Cornered. Penned. Fattened up for slicing and dicing." That hit me right in every heart string.

  • Caitlin Charlton3 months ago

    I like that her laugh was like a clear bell. Such a lovely rich description of someone who is so very precious to you. I like the dash of wisdom. How the universe likes to operate. The hospital gowns bit cuts deep. You've got a good eye. Intuitively unique in verse. I am always blown away by your twist and your vibe. You made it look so easy, even for a free verse. The meld of thoughts and musings. Seemingly separate but yet all together meaningful. Lovely. Fantastic work Aspen 🤗❤️

  • Komal4 months ago

    This one takes flight in such a tender yet fierce way! chickadees may be small, but your words make them mighty. 🥰

  • This was absolutely wonderful! Loved your photo and poem!

  • Love the words and thoughts that you have woven together in this one

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