Cheeseburger Plain & Dry
A Wiggle and a Giggle
This is a Prompt Challenge from the facebook group Vocal + Assist. https://www.facebook.com/groups/vocalplusassist
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I ordered a cheeseburger with the works
Add avocado with raw onion
The waitress took my order then moved to mom and did a twerk
Mom ordered cheeseburger plain and dry
The waitress asked if she wanted tater tots or fries
Mother answered fries
The waitress left our table with a jiggle and as she walked she wiggled
When our food arrived
"Ummm the food is good," mom said with a giggle…
Gobble, gobble, gobble mom ate her food up to the end
Now for chocolate cream pie she'll share it with a friend
The moral of this story is that if you eat up all your dinner
You will be the winner
And you'll finish with dessert with a wiggle and a giggle…
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Rick Henry Christopher
Writing fulfills my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and soothing the bruises of the day.
I’m an open book. I’m not afraid to show my face or speak my mind
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Comments (24)
Hahah lots of wiggling going on Rick, which was fun to picture! 😊
Outstanding!!! Love it!!!
Super, well written!
Great job, congrats!!
Funny!
Funny! Congratulations on your top story.
So Fun, congratulations 🎉🎈
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Fun poem! Congratulations on Top Story!
Super fun! Congrats! 🎉🎉🎉
Way to go, Top story. Two winners from prompts love it.
Yay. congrats Rick
Congratulations on Top Story! Love the Jiggle Prompt
Wow Rick this is awesome 😎 congrats on the top story 😊
Awesome!’ Congratulations 🎉 on top story
Fun poem and congrats on your top story
Sorry, plain dry bun …..not my style. But this poem was. I liked it
Mmm! Avocado and onion! This was a fun, feel good poem. Now I'm hungry, thanks Rick!
It's the Giggle that gets me Everytime ☺️😏🤣
Very cute!!
How lighthearted and full of joy! Well done, Rick :)
This was so adorable!
Very fun! I loved it
great job
Reminds me if the lid saying, Do you want some fries with that shake? Lol