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Chasing to fix Broken Dreams

Rebuilding Hope from Shattered Promises

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Chasing to fix Broken Dreams
Photo by Bogdan Cotos on Unsplash

In twilight's tender, quiet light,

Whispers of lost dreams take flight.

Promises, once strong, now torn apart,

Trust shattered, wandering hearts.

Soft whispers embraced by night,

Dawn's harsh light now takes its right.

Vows, like petals, gently fall,

Silent now, through it all.

Blossomed words, now in despair,

Wilting, caught in sorrow’s snare.

Sweet pledges sung, now shadow-bound,

Dreams fading, nowhere to be found.

Winds of change blow swift and cold,

Echoes of love, fragile and old.

Broken promises, like shattered glass,

Reflect the pain of love’s past.

Yet hope takes root in fragmented dreams,

A promise to rebuild, it seems.

In darkness, a glimmer shines bright,

Guiding the broken through the night.

Gather pieces, one by one,

Mend the heartache till the dawn.

In breaking, chances for new romance,

Mending hearts in life's dance.

Though vows may break and dreams may fray,

New stories weave in life's array.

For every broken promise learned,

In healing's symphony, hearts returned.

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About the Creator

Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Amy littleabout a year ago

    Beautiful

  • Shelby 2 years ago

    Impressive work

  • Kennedy Smith2 years ago

    Amazing poem

  • Tasha McIntosh2 years ago

    Evocative and cathartic, a beautiful piece! Thank you for sharing.

  • Milrose samboque2 years ago

    Amazing poem ❤️ thanks for sharing 👏

  • This was an emotional poem! I loved it!

  • John Baxter2 years ago

    Beautiful poem 👏 thanks for sharing ☺️

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