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Chasing Lightning

on feeling complete shock after running into something stupid on purpose

By Sara WynnPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
Chasing Lightning
Photo by Josep Castells on Unsplash

When blood filled my eyes and my ears

and the ringing began to

split my head like the trees

all around me, cracking and

moaning

I knew that's what I deserved

for chasing lightning.

There's no catching it.

-

I've stood here, rooted where I was struck

and would you know when it hit me

I was face to the sun

I smiled and I soaked it up

my eyes flitting with electricity;

I had been wearing anything to connect me.

-

And then, I held my breath

for the fumes, my lips turned blue

and I knew I followed you

a little too far, uprooted myself

just to follow through

-

When my eyes and ears filled with blood,

I knew.

But, it was so beautiful,

and I felt it in my chest

all the way from my feet.

Rumbling, and beating, and striking,

and clashing.

What a show.

-

Roll on.

-

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About the Creator

Sara Wynn

"No one knows where the edge of the knife is,

and no one knows what intelligent life is."

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Outstanding

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  • Kristina12 months ago

    Turning pain into poems. Roll on!

  • T. Licht12 months ago

    Wow. This had me hooked! The language is very well done.

  • Alex H Mittelman 12 months ago

    I love this poem! Roll on for sure! Great work

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