Chaos
A Descent into the Abyss of the Mind
There’s a corner in your mind,
Where something waits, cruel and confined.
It whispers softly through the cracks,
Until your world turns shades of black.
--
You lie awake but sleep won’t come,
A soundless scream, your body numb.
The dark begins to crawl within,
Flesh tingles from the creeping grin.
--
It starts so small—a fleeting thought,
But soon you’re trapped in webs it’s wrought.
Your memories distort, decay,
What’s real dissolves, then slips away.
--
The mirror bends, your face distorts,
A twisted mockery of sorts.
Your eyes grow hollow, skin turns pale—
What’s left of you begins to fail.
--
The walls now breathe, they pulse and swell,
Each heartbeat tolls a distant bell.
The room expands, then closes tight,
A vacuum, pulling out the light.
--
You hear a voice—it knows your name,
Repeats it like a twisted game.
But every time it speaks the word,
Your sense of self becomes absurd.
--
The ground beneath you starts to bleed,
A river formed from every deed.
Each choice you’ve made, each lie you told,
Now drowns you in its icy hold.
--
No gods to call, no saviors here,
Just shadows feeding on your fear.
The tears won’t come, they freeze inside,
As something strips away your pride.
--
The faces—loved ones long since gone—
They scream your sins, then drag you on.
Their hands reach out, their nails dig deep,
And pull you further from your sleep.
--
You try to wake, but can’t escape—
The mind now breaks, the soul erased.
No comfort found, no shred of grace,
Just shadows, grinning in your place.
--
You think it’s over, but it’s not.
It never ends—the mind will rot.
And in the silence of your cries,
Something laughs behind your eyes.
About the Creator
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme



Comments (2)
Love the rhymes for it makes the poem rhythmic. Good work.
This line: ' The room expands, then closes tight, A vacuum, pulling out the light.' Is so well thought out as an actual reality and a prose. The rest of your poem has a clever way in which the way the words flow.