Challenging times
I need to win, then I promise to shut up my din.
Challenging times
In a challenge,
what I need is to
have my poems read,
commented and hearted.
No, not all,
there’s too many for that.
What about 10?
You could easy do that?
This week, not many liked my stuff.
Am I losing my gift?
Are my poems stuffed?
Only good to put in a loo.
I just don’t know what to do.
So if you read this poem moan,
like and comment
where it hits the spine bone.
If you hate it, pig off,
pass it all by.
Leave me alone in loo,
Waving all my poetry good bye
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Keep reading
More stories from Marie381Uk and writers in Poets and other communities.
More Than Just Words
More than sweet words, I cherish the people who are willing to show up for me. The depth of a relationship isn’t determined by how many times we say, “Let’s meet up another day.” Those seemingly warm words often go unfulfilled. Instead, it is the friend you don’t contact often, or even someone who lives far away, who quietly drives over the moment you say, “I’m a little tired lately.”
By Emily Chan - Life and love sharing8 days ago in Poets
The Devil's Cut
“Comrade, finally you’re awake.” The voice was smooth, sensual. A flickering incandescent bar was all that lit the white, sterile room. All Vladimir remembered was everything going black. He tried to move his arms and found them strapped to the gurney.
By Matthew J. Fromm5 days ago in Fiction
Comments (3)
Don't worry, you still have it, Marie.
Funny u
Interesting and well written.