Carnival of Ruin
Where Agony Feasts and Souls are Bought

Under the sickle moon, they gather in haste,
To feast on the agony, to savor the waste.
A carnival of broken bones,
Where laughter echoes, but not in tones you know.
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The ringmaster grins, teeth sharp as knives,
A gaping maw where the shrieks thrive.
His eyes, cold glass, yet burn with flame,
A soul that perished, never to reclaim.
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The clowns are twisted, masks smeared in red,
Painted smiles hiding the horrors they've fed.
Their hands, like daggers, tear at your flesh,
Ripping apart what’s pure, fresh.
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The tents drip with blood, rusted with despair,
The ferris wheel creaks in its stagnant air.
Each ride a promise of sin’s embrace,
Where those who climb are erased from the race.
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The midway hums with a breathless hiss,
Where souls are bartered, swallowed in bliss.
The fortune teller spins your doom,
Her every word a death-filled tune.
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You’ll be claimed when the bell tolls its end,
A prize for the circus, your life to spend.
The crowd howls louder as you’re strung,
A puppet with strings, forever undone.
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And when dawn’s light breaks the night,
No trace of your scream, no sign of your fight.
For in the carnival, you're just a lost soul,
Feeding the hunger, consuming the whole.
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Comments (5)
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