Carbs and catharsis
Let out all your emotions
Indulge in comfort
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Thanks for reading!
Just a little funny haiku inspired by a comment to and fro between myself and Donna Fox on another of my pieces called Why/What that you can read here:
I also want to take the opportunity to encourage you to check out some of Donna's work. You can view it here at her profile:
As many of you will know, she is one of the nicest and most supportive creators on Vocal, always leaves insightful and heartfelt comments, and writes some truly amazing stuff of her own. You will find something you enjoy if you haven't already taken a look at her work. Poetry, stories, thought pieces, and more!
You can also check out the rest of my work here.
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Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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Comments (7)
Sometimes you just have to 🤗❤️ There is definitely comfort in food! ❤️
Indulge is definitely the key word. 🥰👍🏆
I've just been diagnosed diabetic. Now I have to count those carbs. Cold comfort.
I love this! A good pizza is worth the carbs for sure!
You just had to do this to me, didn't you? I want pizza too 🥺
Perfect title for a stellar haiku, Paul!! Now I want pizza 🤤 Looking forward to checking out Donna’s work– happy you shared!
Awwwww, Paul!!! This was beyond kind and generous! I am speechless for how grateful I am for the shout out and you're far too kind words! Thank you, my friend!! I love that we were just talking about this and I just made a comment about how that would make a fabulous title! I love that!!! I hope your day is improving!! 💜