Candy Apple Haiku
Childhood snack that I loved, but had drawbacks
By DaphsamPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
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Candy apple treat
Leaves teeth full of sweet concrete
Dentist enjoys too
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Comments (12)
That's a good one! 🤭
Not matter the dentist bills, but sometimes you just can't suppress your sugar cravings.
This is outstanding and I love your art too
Yes! I loved these around Halloween, but the caramel always got stuck everywhere.
Delicious, but so true.
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Hahahhahahahahah dentists enjoy too!! Loved your Haiku and painting!
🤣🤣Loved your poem. So true!
Have to work extra hard at cleaning not to end up rotten to the core (of the teeth, that is).
You nailed this one!!!
Who doesn't like candied apples or even caramel apples. My favorites that are sweet and in a way healthy.
lol The dentist! My daughter trick or treated at the shopping center with dentist’s office. I asked him why he was handing out candy and not dental floss or something. He laughed and said he wants to take another vacation to the Caribbean 🤣
Love this. love candy apples. My teeth...less so lol! Awesome entry!