
Red coral beads on a long strand
Wind around my neck
Amaranth spotlights wash away
All trace of imperfection
Brass gleams as tuba bellows out
Russet notes; reverberations
Intertwine with your crooning voice
Liquid limbs sway to sweet swing beats
Melancholy minor chords
Softly lodge inside my throat
Cherry-loaded swallow
Try not to choke on vintage grief
Resonating along past cadences
Of theatre limelight
How I wish I could be back on stage
Lively stepping to choreographed numbers
Ruby lips pinned in Cheshire grin
Carbon copy lines of vibrant girls
Kicking sky high in scarlet heels
Carmine-tipped fingers
Sensually encircle sister wrists
Beads of sweat build beneath fringe hems
Glitter and salt; tantalizing allure
Ambiguous patron silhouettes
Draped in vermillion shadows
Will dream sweet dreams tonight
Graceful bow to curtain black
Night’s opera is best
Dressed in red
About the Creator
Aspen Marie
In love with life and all of its foibles.
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Comments (3)
Wow, felt like I was being swept away into a dance, haha! This is a beautiful poem, Marie. Feels otherworldly. I hope you get back on the stage soon (if that's what you want, lol). And again, another great photo! Now I know you're the best photographer in the world, all these amazing photos check out 😁
Oh wow, you're super talented! I can't dance to save my life, lol. Anyway, you don't do this anymore?
Wow so surreal. Love the way you describe the mood in your poem.