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A Case Study of Function Over Freedom

By CaladriusPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Lantern Light Challenge

I was lit to burn, to call, to keep

At a distance, footsteps gather and stare

So, I glow though shadows gather close to me

A ripple through my vein, a twitch reveals my need

Within the hum I ignite, brief as a flare

I was lit to burn, to call, to keep

In reverb like a note, I reach for reprieve

The hallway ebbs and presents none other than air

So, I glow though shadows gather close to me

Refractions drift past, resigned again to sleep

Patina, how it holds me, then leaves my glass bare

I was lit to burn, to call, to keep

Resounding, a terrible siren of the deep

An echo out of tune lands only nowhere

So, I glow though shadows gather close to me

I rage to flood the night, but am corrected by decree

Forever a lantern, I must say through a glare:

“I was lit to burn, to call, to keep

So, I glow though shadows gather close to me.”

Villanelle

About the Creator

Caladrius

“Perhaps it’s impossible to wear an identity without becoming what you pretend to be.”

— Orson Scott Card, Ender’s Game

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • angela hepworth2 months ago

    Gorgeously written!!

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Sara Wilson3 months ago

    congrats on placing runner up!

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