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Forever and ever
Frozen in supplication
Praying for release
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Frozen green
Moss covered
Stone statues
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Forever and ever
Kneeling in
Supplication
Baring themselves
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Covered in moss, frozen in time
Simple men supplicating themselves in prayer
Statues set in a green field
For a monument to pious men
Created by monks as a memorial
Statues of Buddha, are they hollow
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Comments (4)
Oooo, are they hollow? That's food for thought! Loved your poem!
Made light through the gift of meditation, or heavy bearing the memories & hopes of so many?
Wow MC, this is really thought provoking and just a thoughtful piece in general!! Great work here!
The last line really says a lot. It makes you think