Brownie eyes
Dan & Arturo from my novel Silent Bites (Dan’s perspective)
By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 12 months ago • 1 min read
I feel like, “Brownie Eyes,” was made for you, the organic chemistry that created the perfect, richest, sweetest, deepest
Brown
The first fudgey moment you bite into,
It’s not that problems go away,
But that nothing can touch you in the slightest,
It’s as though heaven is in your reach.

Comments (4)
This was so beautifully written! I loved it so much!
I thought of chocolate when I read your poem... And I fell in love with it all over again. Your poem made me feel warm and cozy.
Fantastic entry!!! Love it!!!
Interesting perspective. Good luck in the challenge!