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Brownie eyes

Dan & Arturo from my novel Silent Bites (Dan’s perspective)

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 12 months ago 1 min read

I feel like, “Brownie Eyes,” was made for you, the organic chemistry that created the perfect, richest, sweetest, deepest

Brown

The first fudgey moment you bite into,

It’s not that problems go away,

But that nothing can touch you in the slightest,

It’s as though heaven is in your reach.

love poems

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran12 months ago

    This was so beautifully written! I loved it so much!

  • Natassia Lawrence12 months ago

    I thought of chocolate when I read your poem... And I fell in love with it all over again. Your poem made me feel warm and cozy.

  • Babs Iverson12 months ago

    Fantastic entry!!! Love it!!!

  • Susan Payton12 months ago

    Interesting perspective. Good luck in the challenge!

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