Brownie Bites
A Fictional Poetic Twist on Food and Feeling
It's National Brownie Day, and we pay tribute to this favoured dessert with an Epulaeryu.
Warmth that soothes, a heart that aches.
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Steam ascends from hot chocolate,
Warmth that floods the tongue.
Brown bites, gracing the sides.
Wrap it like a blanket.
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Moist, brownish squares
Soft sponges press the swift tongue,
That embracing warmth,
A soft blanket for the soul.
Sister's sorry for stealing -
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His heart.
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Original poem by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental.
An epulaeryu is a short, Japanese poem that celebrates the sensory experience of our favourite foods. It focuses on a particular food and its taste, texture, aroma, and temperature. The poet often weaves a personal experience.
Typically written in eight to ten short lines of 5 to 7 syllables each, capturing the joy of eating. Unlike other strict poetic forms, it does not have a strict syllable count or rhyme scheme per line. But it may contain a subtle twist or vivid imagery for emotional resonance.
For Mikeydred's December Challenge
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.
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Comments (7)
This was so sensory rich, now I'm hungry! β€οΈ
Sensuous! This should come with a warning that it will make you hungry! β‘πBillβ‘
Fabulous work! This made me hungry! π₯°
Yum!!! Scrumptious offerings. I guess I should go buy/make some brownies today, lol. Thank you for sharing!
You being writing food lately that my cravings wake up with poem as well π₯°
Very nice chocolate post. I wrote a comment before, and it has been vanished. Or Ξ saw it in my dream. Anyway, I think I need a chocolate now.
Thank you for another December Challenge, and I didn't knwo it was brownie day (though I don;t particularly like them, but I do like your words