And there we were
On a king size bed
Only hugging and saying how much we care
I loved you
I touched you
I hugged you
I felt you
But were you even there?
You said we were making miracles
So why did you left?
It was our first night together
Since that night I wanted you forever
And now I would never
What was the point in making miracles if you were gonna break my bones into little pieces?
But now I'm okey
Because I learned that you would have never be my forever either way
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Welcome to Vocal, we are happy to have you here. Lovely poem, very relatable. I love how you addressed the time together as making miracles, very original and sweet. Well done and thank you for posting.