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Brilliant and Deep Red

Wonderland Challenge Day 3

By Calvin LondonPublished 9 months ago 1 min read
Image by Hans from Pixabay

He gazed into his blazing fire,

As tears formed in his eyes,

The flames licked higher,

Laughing as he drowned in his demise.

The once young yellow flame

Matured with an orange hue,

Became RED with thoughts of her name.

“I expected more from the likes of you.”

As rage set in, the fire began to sing

A serenade for all his tears.

You think you’re sad, well, here is the thing,

No one really cares.

The fire died down; he bowed his head in shame,

There was nothing more to be said,

The embers glowed, his heart the same

Both a brilliant and deep RED.

Till next time,

Calvin

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About the Creator

Calvin London

I write fiction, non-fiction and poetry about all things weird and wonderful, past and present. Life is full of different things to spark your imagination. All you have to do is embrace it - join me on my journey.

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  • Ellie Hoovs9 months ago

    Red with the thoughts of her name is a wonderful line!

  • I felt so sad for him. Loved your poem!

  • Nikita Angel9 months ago

    Fantastic 😊

  • Marie381Uk 9 months ago

    Fabulous ✍️🏆🏆🏆

  • Intriguing poem with its various colours… with red starring.

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