I feel her radiant, bright.
She conjures up a halo, she longs for the whole body of life, devastated by towering devils
And drinking, churning turnstiles that
Only let you out, never in.
Her fury and pain is tangled in singeing light, blurry from earth’s vibrations,
I feel each skip of her shuddering life,
I feel her within an inch of my soul’s devastation.
She is a beautiful three letter word, she is a beautiful sound, she is a dream of
Day.
She is bright.
But, I am night.
I can never move near enough to her, I am so far and so near.
Our tensions move within an atom’s second, but we can be cataclysmic to so much if we fall
Into that goopy, messy, mushy faction
Of space.
How I feel it but cannot live it,
It is a beautiful envy of quaking majesty.
I hear her name in every corner, I see it in the etchings of my story
Yet it cannot grip past the paper and onto the walls of my house,
As our beats are skipping along a long composition of eternity
Flames felt like a pulling song bird
Belting out a most mournful, breathtaking verse.
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Comments (9)
Magnificent 🥰🌹
A beautiful three letter word indeed!
I loved this line so much!!!! 'Her fury and pain is tangled in singeing light, blurry from earth’s vibrations'. Your poems are always so amazing!
Beautiful poem! I really love this: "Her fury and pain is tangled in singeing light, blurry from earth’s vibrations"
I saw this, lost it, couldn't find it and now I did and I am so glad. Wonderful words sis.
This is great. You had with the first line, and it got better from there. Well done.
Outstanding! So many lines to love!!!
"But, I am night" I love that line - something about it kinda resonates. Anyway, the rest of the poem is great as well - please keep writing!
Sweet poem ♥️