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Breech Blocks

An Ekphrastic Sonnet

By D. J. ReddallPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
"La Mitrailleuse" by CRW Nevinson (1915)

It is easy to romanticize war

From the comfort of a small, serene life;

Bloody mayhem seems thrilling from afar

Untouched by the loud storm and bitter strife

But battles must have an acrid odor

How horrendous was the stench of a trench?

As either the gunner or the loader

There must have been sounds, fit the mind to wrench

The screams of the injured and the dying

Whispered prayers, and urgent, loud commands;

A growing sense, beyond all denying

That killing machines make cold, hard demands

To become a soldier must mean changing:

Hearts of flesh for cool metal, exchanging

Ekphrastic

About the Creator

D. J. Reddall

I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    This was so poignant and emotional! Loved your poem!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Wow. That is powerful, and you're right. War is romanticized. None of us who've never been really know anything at all.

  • angela hepworthabout a year ago

    Powerful word choice throughout, wow!

  • Matthew J. Frommabout a year ago

    great final couplet.

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