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Breath held

What is that?

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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Breath held hairs erect

Shadow seen periphery

Movement deathly still

Haiku

About the Creator

Raymond G. Taylor

Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 months ago

    Erect hahahahahhaa. Sorry, I just can't help myself lol. Loved your poem!

  • Mark Graham3 months ago

    What a psychological haiku for it will make you think on how to act. Good job.

  • L.C. Schäfer3 months ago

    This one makes me want to look over my shoulder 😬

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