Finding the ways out of a realm that does not see me,
emptying the load that ways down the soul
hoping peace prevails.
Broken apart on a road less traveled on,
a hidden image behind a reflection that has known its image for a long time,
everything is new.
Let each burden fall off,
one
by
one
as if they never happened,
but the lessons prevail.
Undoing yesterday's sorrows and findings of tomorrow's that are brand new.
Make me a tree, the branches be my new life
one that I chose to live,
one that I chose to be happy in.
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This is so beautifully written! I love how it captures the journey of letting go and embracing renewal. The image of becoming a tree with branches as a new life is powerful and inspiring. Great work ✨
Congratulations on Top Story🥳🥳🥳🥳Loved your poem💕
Congrats on the Top Story! I love the Robert Frost reference in this and your format choices. The separate lines for "one / by / one" really adds a visual to the metaphor you're using of burdens falling like leaves.
🎉 Congratulations on hitting Top Story on Vocal! 🏆 Your hard work and creativity truly shine through, and it’s so well-deserved! 🌟 Keep up the amazing storytelling—this is just the beginning of even more success! 🎈📖🙌
…and I meant to also say congratulations on TS🎉🥳🥳
Wow, this is so wonderful, I loved it!!
"Seeking freedom, shedding burdens, finding peace, embracing a self-chosen life." excellent
well written piece and congrats👌
Aw, love it!
Que bichinho fofo é o da árvore. Lembra um esconderijo ou uma fuga.
This is lovely. Congrats on the TS.
Well done on top story ☺
Life can be a struggle at times. Love this poem and its imagery. Excellent work.
This poem captures a profound journey of self-discovery and renewal. The imagery of shedding burdens like leaves from a tree beautifully symbolizes growth and the hope for peace. Your exploration of letting go and embracing new beginnings is truly inspiring! you can also read my article - https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/the-whisper-of-the-fallen-trees%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">