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Bouncy Attitude

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By Rowan Finley Published about a year ago 1 min read
Photo taken by Luis Quintero on pexels.com

She had long wavy purple hair,

that was bouncy, just like her attitude.

Her fingernails were chipped, with fading polish and aspirations,

she played with her ripped hippie jeans.

There was always a song ringing in her head, this made her shoulders dance,

and she lounged wherever she went.

Laying in the tall goldenrod blooms she’d hum,

and daydream of being a spider.

Imagining her adroit legs spinning a bug,

she lived and breathed with a playful mind.

On this particular day,

she lounged in a hospital gown,

“You’re going to have a baby,”

the doctor waved his hand in front of her face,

waking her up from another daydream.

“Oh,” she fidgeted and pretended to tickle her own stomach.

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About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Komal11 months ago

    Love how she’s just enjoying through life, even in a hospital gown. I fully support her lounging lifestyle.✨

  • Testabout a year ago

    The angles through which you see things are beautiful.

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