Bouncing Back
An ode to reformation
Covered in dirt laying down in the trenches.
Mice and roaches crawling away by mere inches.
Finally able to move while surrounded by the crud.
Now it’s time to rise up out of the mud. Was manipulated before and found a trap.
But now I’m Spaulding on the concrete bouncing back.
No time left for any toxic attachments. I’ve grown up and lost those attachments.
I’m signing a new lease on life. With a new found peace on life. No more strife.
I’m aware the price of peace won’t come easy.
But it’s a price I’m willing to pay everyday if need be.
Things have never been more clear, no time for confusion.
Save the guilt trips for those who ride with delusion.
I’m starting over mentally sober without an ounce of crap.
New day and a new way for me I’m bouncing back.
About the Creator
Joe Patterson
Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions



Comments (16)
Great work!
Very inspiring!!!!!
Awesome work, congrats on TS
I loved the rhythm of this poem. Wonderful job and great image too! Congrats on the Top Story!
This reads like a rap! Fantastic cadence. Great work, Joe!
👏 congratulations🎉🥳🎉🎉
Ever on.....well done. Congratulations on the Top Story, too.
Feel you on that tip Joe! Well done on achieving another top story!
Nicely done! Congrats on the TS.
Big up and bounce back more stronger
Congratulations on your TS! Great piece
Congratulations on Top Story!!!🥰🥰🥰
Keep going, Joe!
Very inspiring piece 👍🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
Spectacular inspirational poem!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕
Super Duper Flyy & Powerful! Well done Joe!! 💪🏾