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Bottled Rage

Villanelle of Regret

By Novel AllenPublished about a month ago 1 min read

I tightly sealed the rage in glass and thorny vine,

Ignoring fingers clawing at the cork - wretched

A storm contained, yet never quite benign.

~~

The bottle thrums beneath the moon’s design,

Its shadow leaks a vow to quiet death -

I tightly sealed the rage in glass and thorny vine.

~~

Each face it mirrored once was yours and mine,

Now fractured in the aftermath of ire and wrath -

A storm contained, yet never quite benign.

~~

The thorns remember every twisted line,

Each word that scorched the path we walked beneath -

I tightly sealed the rage in glass and thorny vine.

~~

It pulses still, bitter - a venomous design,

A relic of the love we left in shreds -

A storm contained, yet never quite benign.

~~

So let it rest where broken truth may yet align,

A bottled ache, a relic of sadness and regret -

I tightly sealed the rage in glass and thorny vine,

A storm contained, yet never quite benign.

sad poetryVillanelle

About the Creator

Novel Allen

You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.

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  • Antoni De'Leonabout a month ago

    Well, this is one way to get rid of the ache of love, that ole devil. Yet, it will find ways to escape and get the next silly heart all in a tizzy. That bottle looks solid though 😊🤗❤️

  • Sandy Gillmanabout a month ago

    This is such a beautifully dark and haunting piece. I love the imagery of the bottled rage and thorny vines.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oh wow, this was so deep and poignant. Loved it!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a month ago

    I will never write like this! You should be so proud of this piece ☺

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a month ago

    This is a winner Novel! Extraordinarily fabulous! Go gurl! 💪🏾💕👏🏾

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Wow! This is exceptional - I have yet to try a villanelle- I can’t wrap my tired brain about around it. This one is impressive and expressive!!

  • Lana V Lynxabout a month ago

    Excellent villanelle, Novel!

  • Dylan about a month ago

    You have an exceptional way with words. Excellent villanelle!

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