
I tightly sealed the rage in glass and thorny vine,
Ignoring fingers clawing at the cork - wretched
A storm contained, yet never quite benign.
~~
The bottle thrums beneath the moon’s design,
Its shadow leaks a vow to quiet death -
I tightly sealed the rage in glass and thorny vine.
~~
Each face it mirrored once was yours and mine,
Now fractured in the aftermath of ire and wrath -
A storm contained, yet never quite benign.
~~
The thorns remember every twisted line,
Each word that scorched the path we walked beneath -
I tightly sealed the rage in glass and thorny vine.
~~
It pulses still, bitter - a venomous design,
A relic of the love we left in shreds -
A storm contained, yet never quite benign.
~~
So let it rest where broken truth may yet align,
A bottled ache, a relic of sadness and regret -
I tightly sealed the rage in glass and thorny vine,
A storm contained, yet never quite benign.

About the Creator
Novel Allen
You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.


Comments (8)
Well, this is one way to get rid of the ache of love, that ole devil. Yet, it will find ways to escape and get the next silly heart all in a tizzy. That bottle looks solid though 😊🤗❤️
This is such a beautifully dark and haunting piece. I love the imagery of the bottled rage and thorny vines.
Oh wow, this was so deep and poignant. Loved it!
I will never write like this! You should be so proud of this piece ☺
This is a winner Novel! Extraordinarily fabulous! Go gurl! 💪🏾💕👏🏾
Wow! This is exceptional - I have yet to try a villanelle- I can’t wrap my tired brain about around it. This one is impressive and expressive!!
Excellent villanelle, Novel!
You have an exceptional way with words. Excellent villanelle!