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Borrowed Light

A Letter to the Moon

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 2 months ago 1 min read

Dear Moon:

Tonight, I come to you with empty hands

turned upward like two shallow bowls

asking what I've always asked of you

a basketful of moonlight for the road ahead

You who rise faithfully over wilderness and city alike

who've memorized the shape of every ocean

who know what it means to disappear completely

yet trust you'll return whole again

teach me that kind of certainty

Show me how to hold absence and presence as one breath

I have lost my way in the between places

where decisions blur like clouds across your face

and every path looks equally uncertain

Light me forward

old friend

old witness

They say you're made of borrowed light

that you have no fire of your own

but I know better

What else could survive such endless transformation

What else could be so many things at once

muse

compass

confidant

and still rise faithfully each night

So I'm asking

fill my basket with your glow

enough to see by

enough to trust the next step

I don't need the whole journey illuminated

just this patch of ground

this present moment

this single breath

between one phase and the next

You've borne the weight

of all my inquiries

my faltering steps

my endless wandering

And now I ask

one thing more

one breath more

one chance

to be held

by your light

Your earthbound admirer,

A wanderer seeking balance

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Andrea Corwin 2 months ago

    Lovely poem and good luck! I liked the visual of two shallow bowls and a basket full of moonlight.

  • Sean A.2 months ago

    Love the idea of asking for a basket of moonlight, some great imagery!

  • Darla M Seely2 months ago

    Nice one, Tim, are you reading my comments?

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