Boot Laces

what have I done?

By Raine FielderPublished 4 months ago • 1 min read

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dirty fingernails

shook as they struggled to tie

bloody boot laces

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Raine Fielder

Raine has been writing poetry since she was in seventh grade. She has written several poems, song lyrics, short stories and eight books. Writing is her main purpose.

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Boot Laces

what have I done?

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