
i make no apologies
for the statements
i make
no gestures of lament
i offer no
excuses
exclusions
explanations
or exhalations
(tuck your elbows
tight into your body
whilst holding your upper guard;
catch and ride the blow)
my rudimentary allusions
may be oblique and absurd
pointed and cutting
laden with a promise of hurt
or the threat of amusement
they spilled from my mind
to the paper
via my pen...
i had fun
i spare no idle thought
for your feelings
i waste nothing inside
for my tone or demeanor
i'm not gonna say i'm sorry
cause i'm not
i write (i chuckle)
you read (i buckle)
this is our
mutually beneficial relationship
(i hope!)
i had to say it
i had to play it
and then the way it
was perceived by you
well that's just it
you can't can it
you can try and ban it
but my plan it
was laid out
on the war table in my head
a long time ago
i lined my literary lead soldiers
in neat rows
i promised them plunder
i promised them fame
i promised to relinquish
them of all the blame
and then i unleashed them
maddened raveners
because
the floating rib
is a choice target
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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