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Blue star

Baby, I'm going to burn...

By Jennisea RedfieldPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
Blue star
Photo by Juskteez Vu on Unsplash

I was on fire,

Full of desire.

Spinning round,

Round,

Round,

round,

Burning like a blue star.

You were so full of passion,

Like it was a fashion

Pulling me down,

Down,

Down,

Down

Lower than the social bar.

My flames were famished,

Your passion began to quench.

Making me drown

Drown

Drown

Drown

Stuck under your glacial gaze.

But I am not falling for it

Never again.

I will burn again.

Hotter

Brighter

A blazing light

Shining on my people,

Singing our songs.

My fire is my voice,

Louder.

Louder,

Prouder,

Prouder,

My flames are hotter

And baby, you’re gonna watch me burn.

And I'm gonna to burn.

Baby,

I'm going to burn.

Like a blue star.

Balladperformance poetrySong Lyrics

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Jennisea Redfield

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran6 months ago

    Oooo, the repetition made it seem like song lyrics and I sang it to my own tune. Loved your poem!

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