Blue-Eyed Baby
A Single Mother's Love Through The Pain
Blueberry twinkles,
Turn the sorrow to pure joy
You have "Daddy's eyes."
About the Creator
Misty Rae
Author of the best-selling novel, I Ran So You Could Fly (The Paris O'Ree Story), Chicken Soup For the Soul contributor, mom to 2 dogs & 3 humans. Nature lover. Chef. Recovering lawyer. Living my best life in the middle of nowhere.
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Comments (35)
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Very good
This is so sweet and profound!
You said a lot, well done
beauty love <3
Simple, beautiful, and impactful. I love it!
the cutest little one
This is beautiful! 💕🙂
wow
I thought to comment a compliment, then caught the subtitle..Bravo! Hit it right home !
adorable story, thank you for sharing!
Absolutely wonderful haiku; full of love yet bittersweet.
Nice 👍
So cute Blue-Eyed Baby and amazing haiku. I am also thinking about mother's pain for writing!!
This. Is. Just. Amazing! Within three lines, you have managed to describe how you feel about having the tiny Angel, but also expressed your pain that is reflected in the baby's eye 'You have "Daddy's eyes." reminding you of whom you have lost.
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Adorkable!
Beautiful and precious!
So sweet! Love it!
This is simple, sweet, and so full of love!
Sweet poem. 🥰
Lovely