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Blue Dream

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By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 years ago โ€ข Updated 3 years ago โ€ข 1 min read
Blue Dream
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Desolate and Sad...

I pushed fast but was dazed,

Sharp from a Blue Dream.

sad poetry

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  1. Heartfelt and relatable

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  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    I agree with Poppy, I loved that dazed line. Short and delightfully deeep.

  • Poppy 2 years ago

    Gorgeous poem! So much said in such few words. I love this especially, 'I pushed fast but was dazed'!

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  • Wow Lonzo this was amazing ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™blue but sometimes we feel blue and poetry helps!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Fabulous!!!๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’–

  • J. S. Wade3 years ago

    Excellent! Lonzo! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

  • C. H. Richard3 years ago

    Beautiful visual created by 3 sentence๐Ÿ’™

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    So, so lovely. Well done! โค๏ธ

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