Photo by Joyce McCown on Unsplash
the color of cold
chilling to these weary bones
ice flows through your veins
About the Creator
KJ Aartila
A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.
My Substack
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
View more
Add your insightsExpert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Keep reading
More stories from KJ Aartila and writers in Poets and other communities.
Comments (9)
This is amazing; love the ice flowing through veins part:)
Oohh I love the vibes that fed my visual imagination while reading!
This was amazing! Your poem gave out freezing vibes!
spanking!!
Brrrrrr. Excellent
Feeling the Cold!!! Fantastic!!!
Stunning, I feel cold and warm
I felt the shivers!! Great work :)
This is fabulous. Really well done.