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Blood Red Cotton Wool Sunset

Words not spoken

By Ian VincePublished 7 months ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
Blood Red Cotton Wool Sunset
Photo by Christian Seeling on Unsplash

I don’t want to be here anymore.

That’s the simple, dangerous truth of it.

I seek an abnormal singularity of somewhere safe,

an empty silent place that equals the vacuum

of a soul without content.

I keep these things to myself so nobody has to hear.

Better left said, a valve will open wide, let the pressure leave

to find its symmetry and balance action against inertia.

I watch the billowing above as motivation melts away.

A dismal cloud dissipates as empty threat

Staining the already blood-red cotton wool sunset.

Mental Health

About the Creator

Ian Vince

Erstwhile non-fiction author, ghost & freelance writer for others, finally submitting work that floats my own boat, does my own thing. I'll deal with it if you can.

Top Writer in Humo(u)r.

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  • Huzaifa Dzine6 months ago

    so good

  • Ian Vince (Author)7 months ago

    Thank you for being so supportive, I should say that, yes, I'm OK! The challenge was to say something we think but we do not usually share with others. Thank you all for some very kind words.

  • Sandy Gillman7 months ago

    It takes courage to put these feelings into words. I hope you're doing ok!

  • inertia, yeah...me too

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