Blood Drenched
That strange metallic sweetness #DYSTOPIAN FANTASY POEM
Rain rain pour today
Martians wants to slay.
As the clouds come from far away,
The night hunts on the day.
Blood is all that falls,
that's perhaps what makes it mars.
Silence occupies the stars
blood floods the walls
Who is the one with the scar
Nameless numbers in war
Blood drenched, Red stained
Ghosts walk in boots of flame,
no breath, no soul, no name.
Eyes burn where hope once slept,
love forgotten, vengeance kept.
March on, oh cursed divine,
drinking death like poisoned wine.
Blood drenched, Land red
Machines dream of burning kings,
Children born beneath alarms,
taught to cradle rusted arms.
scepters lost in golden rings.
About the Creator
Karun
🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️
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Oh wow, what a unique poem! I love the concept, and the wordplay is just wonderful! 😊 It's dark yet amazing