
You let those words fall from your mouth—
not once,
not thrice,
but over and over,
like a broken hymn you rehearsed
until it no longer carried weight.
No guilt laced your tongue,
no hesitation carved your silence.
The syllables dripped
like oil on fire,
dark and shining,
burning everything they touched.
I stood there,
watching the wreckage
collect at my feet—
your words,
your venom,
your rehearsed betrayal.
They say words fade,
but yours lingered,
etching themselves
into the thin walls of my chest.
Every echo was a wound,
every wound a reminder
that love can sound like cruelty
when spoken too often without care.
And still—
I gathered them,
the shards of your voice,
the stains of your silence.
I carried them in my hands
as if they were fragile glass,
even while they cut me open.
Because sometimes
we mistake repetition for truth,
and cruelty for clarity.
Sometimes we stand too long
in the fire of another’s voice
and forget
that we are allowed to leave
before the ashes claim us.
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Zakir Ullah
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