Perhaps I’m better off on my own
That is not what I want
Rushing away from unpleasant possibilities
I walk through the door alone
Hoping I’m not too late
Pulling out my chair
While you're sitting there
Trying not to be noticeably unnerved
“It’s nice to get to meet you”
I say a few words
I'm incredibly uncomfortable
You don't seem to notice
The conversation somehow just keeps going
To my amazement
I begin to wonder what could come next
I didn’t realize I could feel this way until now.
It’s terrifying
You’re different from anyone I’ve ever met
You defy the laws of nature
I am in awe of you.
Your laugh is ridiculous
Truth be told
that's what others might say but
I think your laugh is beautiful
When you speak
I listen in a daze
You’ve altered the course of my life
Over a short cafe lunch
Who knew I could feel so strongly about someone
The expectations have been proven wrong
Before long, I know
You are amazing, kind, and wonderful.
My friends said,
I will love you
Are they right?
I’ve been waiting for this for a long time.
Perhaps, finally, I’ve found the one I love.
I can't wait for another date.
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*Read it forwards, read it backwards. For Vocal's inverse challenge.*
About the Creator
Abigail Penhallegon
I'm an aspiring novelist. I've started many stories and just recently become more confident in my abilities due to the encouragement of great friends and teachers. I'd like to spread joy through my writing, so prepare for happy endings. :)



Comments (4)
Dear Abby - I'm so glad I've just discovered your 'Original' offerings, among the so many snippers/with sharp scissors of late. *As I scroll through your presentations I've subscribed to you with pleasure. Please, when you have a moment, direct me towards one of your favorites; we all have them. I'm just a retired legal writer morphed into a self described 'Goof Writer' nothing more; not into contests or awards. But, I've noticed we write on similar topics - and this one of yours so caught my 'Heart' since it reminded me so much of my "Heartsy"...From my Generation to yours - - With my Respect - Jay, Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Village Community -
Clever inverse! Great writing.
I hope it's autobiographical and everything goes beautifully!
Beautiful and poignant!