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Blackened Heart

A poem of love's first betrayal

By Danielle TanisPublished 5 years ago 1 min read
Blackened Heart
Photo by chamika rukmal on Unsplash

Tangled web of woven desires

Stirring within the depths of my soul.

Knowingly, he feeds those fires,

Wanting, needing, to take control.

Fighting, running, confused, and torn,

My heart I leave behind.

He pulls the chain, twisting tighter,

Quietly taking my peace of mind.

He wants my soul, I know it, I feel it!

He wants all that I am.

Leaves me breathless, hurting, bleeding,

Quickly destroying all that I have.

I want my Savior, need my Savior,

But filthy, dirty, I hide from His eyes.

This boy, this tormentor, this idol of mine,

Has taken away the Joy in my life.

The light is gone, it’s quenched, maybe missing.

My heart is broken, busted, bleeding.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Danielle Tanis

I am a mompreneur, a creative thinker, and I love fiercely. I am a daughter of the Most High, a strong survivor, and deeply respect those who serve our country selflessly. I am determined to help other incredible women thrive.

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