Who am I? A young Black male. My history has been a mystery for centuries in a mental penitentiary.
After dusk, I’m darkest at night, but during the daytime my skin shines bright.
All my life they said I had a way with words, but this couldn’t save me from being profiled and slurred.
I’m unheard like the hollowest sound, every time I’m in a store I get followed around.
Though I won't say life got harder, people always made fun of me because I was darker.
Though brutally honest I still state facts, straight facts that make the world hate me and wanna throw me on the train tracks.
People told me that my S-K-I-N was a S-I-N, but I don’t fret, I grin, because God in Heaven said no matter what, I win.
I got older and saw I was a cutie. The darkness of my skin tone is what perfected my beauty.
No matter how cruel the world of flesh may seem, I’ll always be the glory of my ancestors dream.
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Joe Patterson
Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.
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Gorgeous - you and your words! 😁
Excellent Joe... Absolutely excellent. You have a natural way of communicating your thoughts with creativity and intelligence. This is an exceptional poem. Great job!!!