Bittersweet Ashes
A poem of heartbreak

Your love set me afire
And burnt my heart to ash
I put myself in your hands
You threw me out with the trash
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Promises sworn in dark of night
Vows of always and forever
Shattered on break of morning light
Leading only to the land of never
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Here I sit sifting through the wreckage
Cooling ash coating burnt fingers
Wondering what more could I have done
As the patina of you lingers

Was I too eager to please?
Was I not eager enough?
Was my affection too silken
My love perhaps too rough?
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I’d beg you to come back
Plead at your feet
But you’d only spurn me again
Burn me in your icy heat
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So I’ll try my level best
To douse the smoldering coals
Cool the lingering heat
Of a bonfire sparked on sinking shoals

About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
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