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Bish Bosch Bash

Led Burninplane

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished 7 months ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
Illustration generated using Google Gemini, as edited: RGT

Aha

You need pokin'...

Baby, I'm not jokin'

I'm gonna send ya

Purg't'ry darlin'

Deep down inside

Sweetie, you need it

I'm gonna give you some grief

I'm gonna give you some grief

Oh, notta whole lotta grief

Notta whole lotta grief

Notta whole lotta grief

[Verse 2]

You've been burnin'

Baby, I been burnin'

All the crap times

Baby, baby, I'm not learning

Deep, deep down inside

Uh, lovey, you need it

I'm gonna give you some grief, uh

I'm gonna give you some grief, uh

Oh, whole lotta grief

Notta whole lotta grief

Notta whole lotta grief

[Instrumental Break]

ooh, ooh, aah

ooh, ooh, aah

Ooh, aah, aah, aah, aah, aah, aah, aah, aah, aah, aah, aah, aah, aah, aah, aah, ooh, aah, ooh, aah, ooh, aah, ooh, aaah (Ow, ow, ow, owie!)

Ooh

Yeah

Yeah

[Tea Break]

[Verse 3]

You've been smoochin'

Baby, I've been moochin'

All the bad times

Baby, I've been misusin'

Deep, deep down inside

I'm gonna give you some grief

I'm gonna give you every inch of my....

I'm gonna give you my grief (Oh)

Yeah, alright, let's go (Ah)

O ~ o ~

Inspired by: The Creature Lurks and author C. Rommial Butler's use of a painting by Hieronymus Bosch. Thanks also to Lamar Wiggins and Vocal+ Assist Facebook Group. Any resemblance between this poem and a certain song by a certain ancient, has-been rock group, famous last century for great riffs and largely meaningless lyrics, is entirely (un)intended and will be vigorously defended in court, should it come to that. If you have no idea what I am talking about, you could always do a Google search.

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About the Creator

Raymond G. Taylor

Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran7 months ago

    Lol, the tea break was my favourite! Loved what you've done here!

  • "A whole lotta grief" or "notta whole lotta grief"? Depends upon the day or time how this song will rhyme.

  • Mark Graham7 months ago

    Good one. This little ditty sounds and reads like Country Grunge if there was such a thing.

  • C. Rommial Butler7 months ago

    Well and hilariously wrought! Thanks for this! This is not so far removed from a Zeppelin piece, really.

  • Novel Allen7 months ago

    Sorry, but this sounds like the rambling of a tipsy composer. Well, a bit of it is needed sometimes, Of course Rommie and Lamar had a hand in it. Great times.

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