
Happy Birthday you
Cake and ice cream, goodies galore
and maybe presents, too.
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Birthday
intuition
regarding certain
treats that are
hereby given
determined by others
allowing
you to enjoy your day.
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Caring
Confident
Considerate
Communicative
Cake
*Note: Words that could describe the birthday person along with what one gets on this special day.
About the Creator
Mark Graham
I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.
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Comments (10)
Yes, birthday haiku, acrostic, and tautogram!!😊💕
Oh this was a lovely idea. 🎂🍭 If a persons birthday landed on the day you published this. This would've been a wonderful surprise. - I liked how you focused on the fact that the gifts and sweets would be determined by the person, gifting. You have highlighted the surprise. This feeling we could all relate to. The knowing that we are going to get something, and wondering what it might be. 🎂🍭 I love your tautogram, especially because you have described what it means to give a cake, using one word. Clever and creative. Awesome work, Mark 🤗 ❤️ 🖤
Ah yes, birthdays, but who is counting. Hoping yours was a happy one.
Yes! keep counting them. Nicely done! My birthday is also in July. July 27th. What day is yours?
Upbeat and cheerful. Well Done!! happy birthday!!
So uplifting, nicely done - three in one.
This was so cheerful! I even questioned why I spend my birthdays alone but the words that describe me as a birthday person are just very different I guess.
Three for of poetry in one , excellent work!
Is it your birthday? Birthdays can certainly be fun.
Awesome love this 🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆✍️