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Birth Order

Words I can’t say to the people I love most

By Chloë J.Published 9 months ago 1 min read
Birth Order
Photo by Johny Goerend on Unsplash

I am a rock and my sisters are wind,

free-wheeling throughout

the world, vivid and

wild and lovely.

I am mere stone and my sisters are steam,

writhing and rising

into the air ‘til

sweet dissipation.

I am mountain, my sisters, auroras,

lights that dance sweetly

in the North, rivers

betwixt the night stars.

I am chained to and by myself, stagnant.

My sisters are free.

I wonder if they

feel free, or if

maybe, they

feel like

me.

Family

About the Creator

Chloë J.

Probably not as funny as I think I am

Insta @chloe_j_writes

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  • Sean A.9 months ago

    Mountains, even stones can be beautiful things shaped by, and giving shape to, the wind and streams. Wonderful imagery in this

  • I think that they think that you are amazing, Chloë, & wish they could be more like you.

  • Sandy Gillman9 months ago

    This is such a beautiful and thought-provoking poem.

  • Paul Stewart9 months ago

    aw, this is so beautiful, with a current of sadness! sublime, Chloe!

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