Between the Heel and Horizon
A Song Half-Stepped into Becoming

I carry myself forward though the ground beneath me
seems to open into an inquiry
this path neither the birthplace of my stride
nor the destination promised by its measure
A grass blown field unfolds without explanation
the long green congregates under the sun
and still there is no summons or call
only the mild astonishment of being paused
while moving
I do not know if I am grateful
yet I marvel at how the ankle turns
how the body remembers motion
before the mind has chosen where to set its gaze
The thought half gathered in me
remains unsaid swirling like the hush between a sonant beginning
and its reflection on another's ear
I want to speak of purpose
but the land leans one way the birds another
children in the distance lift their arms
as if signaling to no one in particular
It seems the world carries its answer forward
though I remain unsupplied with my own
Banners of cloud slide overhead
patches of light rise and vanish upon the earth
I am reminded of the body's procession
how it accompanies itself faithfully
pulsing in the wrist melting into stride
singing within me though I stay undecided
Midway through the path
midway through my thought
I sense the glory of incompletion
how each fragment belongs
how every unfinished gesture vibrates
And so forward I step again
not toward conclusion
but into the bright confusion
that welcomes me as kin
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.


Comments (3)
we are perfectly and wonderfully created, aren't we? And then we must decide how to fit in the picture of this world
Damn, sir. This stunning. I felt every bit of this "Journey". I love so many turns of phrases and descriptions that just made me feel immersed and made me ponder. Well done, Tim. You can't see it, but I'm applauding you from my chair in Scotland.
WOW! Phenomenally-written, Tim! Very impressive!