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Better Off Dead

A Mid-step No One Wants

By Julie LacksonenPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
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Damn

Awake again

So much pain.

Is anyone here?

Why am I here?

An accident?

A stroke?

A face flashes to mind.

My wife?

A daughter?

A nurse?

More questions than answers.

My heart aches

Physically

Emotionally

What is that beeping?

Is this the end?

No, don't do that.

Stop "saving me"

I'd rather be at peace.

This is not living.

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Author's note:

This poem emphasizes the need for a living will. God forbid, if you ended up in a situation like this, unable to speak for yourself, you would want your former, lucid self to speak for you. "Do not resuscitate" needs to be in writing if that is your wish.

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About the Creator

Julie Lacksonen

Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.

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  • Lightning Bolt ⚡5 months ago

    ⚡️💙⚡️

  • Tiffany Gordon5 months ago

    Excellent use of the prompt!

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    Very sad poem.

  • Gina C.5 months ago

    Oh, the ending to this is so emotional! So well done. 💙

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