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Betrayal

In Eclipse

By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Betrayal
Photo by Filipe Almeida on Unsplash

even after all I've/we've been through - the blood, sweat, tears, pain, betrayal, sorrow and regrets

cold realities, hard truths and uncomfortable admissions of guilt

love tarnished, tainted and tattered, bonds beaten, bruised and broken

I still have hope

perhaps things will never be as they once were, perhaps that's a good thing

stars shine and die, the moon hides the sun for but a moment, love may lessen but can also blossom

ends usher new beginnings and with hope and love, nothing is ever truly lost

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Author's Notes: Another entry into the In Eclipse Challenge, which you can find out more about below:

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    WOW! Amazing work Paul!!

  • John Cox2 years ago

    I loved this poem, Paul! It stretches from the cosmic to the quantum, covers eons and still lingers in the moment, and finds in the universal hope for the personal. Translation: it’s a bridge to hope and renewal. Really excellent, moving work!

  • JBaz2 years ago

    The eclipse of a new beginning and hope

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Just lovely. Nicely optimistic as an eclipse should be.

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