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Before the Final breath

The unnoticed ending

By Peace OputaPublished 7 months ago 1 min read

They say death is our finality,
The moment all things end,
But it’s isn’t always thunderous,
Not a scream, not a crash, not a fall,
A quiet disappearance before we know it’s begun,
A slow, steady, fading of life.

It’s the death of dreams once yours to hold,
The loss of love, of trust, of moments now cold,
Each loss, not just a thing gone,
But a piece of oneself, slipping silently away.
And in the midst of these small deaths,
You wonder if you’re still alive.

We live as if death is distant,
A final breath, years away,
But it lingers in the corners, hidden in plain sight,
It doesn’t wait for you to be ready; it takes what it will.
A breath, a heartbeat, a soul………
Left behind, you feel the weight of absence,
A presence no longer there, yet never truly gone.

Death doesn’t always cry out,
It whispers softly, a smooth, calm breeze,
That shifts and stirs what once was,
It begins long before the last breath,
In unnoticed moments,
Until the chair where you once sat,
Sways gently in the wind,
Dusty, empty and untouched.

You think you’ll recognize death, when it comes,
But it is a descent into the shadows,
So slow you don’t see it at first,
The silence that prepares you for goodbye,
Fading laughter, Eyes growing distant,
Memories losing their shape,
Until all that remains are echoes of the things you knew.
It leaves you with a space nothing can fill.

Still, you’ll breathe,
Still, you’ll move through the days,
You’ll carry the silent weight,
The loss of pieces you didn’t know were fading,
Until the final breath comes,
And it feels like nothing at all,
Because so much had already gone


Free VerseProsesad poetry

About the Creator

Peace Oputa

I am a Multilingual wordsmith, weaving my joys, wounds, and transformations into words. My writing mirrors my seasons, restless storms, quiet healing, fleeting laughter, and deep longing. sometimes light, sometimes heavy, but always real.

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  • D.K. Shepard7 months ago

    This is beautifully and masterfully done, Peace! Really powerful exploration of death's inevitability

  • Sean A.7 months ago

    Heartbreakingly true. Feeling a lot of these little passings lately.

  • Komal7 months ago

    Wow. That one hits like a soft ache! It carries the weight of a thousand silent goodbyes. I need to go stare at a dust-speckled chair for a bit now. ✨

  • Sandy Gillman7 months ago

    You've captured the quiet nature of grief so beautifully.

  • This was so poignant and deep. Held so much truth to it as well. Loved your poem!

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