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bedding down

the garden goes to sleep

By Dane BHPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Honorable Mention in The Sound of First Frost Challenge
bedding down
Photo by Wolfgang Hasselmann on Unsplash

I cover next spring’s bulbs

with a rustling blanket of this month’s fallen,

thick with October rain

and the last grass clippings.

*

The garden looks like

a recently filled grave,

quiet tumult and sleeping soil

*

holding the promise

of rebirth like secrets.

A whistle comes down

through the houses,

a preview of the swirl and howl

that will bury us

in the eventual quiet.

*

For now, the land clings

to its last shred of waking

like a child fighting sleep,

like it fears the long rest

and what might come

or not.

*

For now, the wind

still sounds like a warning.

nature poetry

About the Creator

Dane BH

By day, I'm a cog in the nonprofit machine, and poet. By night, I'm a creature of the internet. My soul is a grumpy cat who'd rather be sleeping.

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  • Marilyn Glover2 months ago

    Dane, congratulations on your honorable mention!👏😊

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Pamela Williams2 months ago

    Congratulations! This is a beautiful poem.

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