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By BrenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

i write of strange places

i write of foul deeds

i write of stray wants

desires and needs

the real the imagined

the best not yet said

ethereal moments

that present in my head

i write of pale yearnings

i write of unrequited desires

i write of flames cool and warm

as i gently fan the fires

the confusion illusion

fat and frequently fed

will burst if not tended

will bruise if not bled

i write of hate in our hearts

i write of love in our eyes

i write of angry voices

and contented sighs

fragmented images

become thoughts

and then the words

lend themselves

to the sentence

the sentence in time

may eventually rhyme

but not always

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Moon Desert3 years ago

    My record recently was 10 poems a day, but then I'm left with few days without my own new poetry. There are always old edits and fiction. I guess "the best not yet said". I wonder why love is not in the hearts, but in the eyes? Is this how men see love?

  • Jacob Sherman3 years ago

    You're knocking it out of the park like three times a day while I'm struggling to even step up to the plate once a week. It is, sir, truly fucking inspiring.

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